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I'm glad that this thread has an author, debo. I'm always dreaming to be an author. I was wondering what young authors can contribute to children's literature.

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Hello Snowbird,


    I'm not an author, an author has been published.  To this date I've only had a few poems published in anthologies, which, technically,  isn't the same as being published.  


I'm a writer. 


So are you. 


   With regards to your question:  I think you've already stated the answer in these conversations.  Young writers bring perspective to their readers, as do we all.   The perspective of the young writer is less complex, more direct, and, often, cleaner ~ more clear.  Young people see fewer complexities.   Sometimes this is good because then the reader fills in the gaps with their own complexities.  Sometimes this is not so good because the writing tends to seem simplistic. 


Still, perspective is unique, and necessary ~ it is representative of the world we live in...and that is valuable.


    Your gift is also valuable.  How are you using it?  Touting another person's work is a great thing ~ I love Ray Bradbury's work ~ but, using your promotional skills to focus on another's work is a job, not a calling.  What are you working on?  Where does your heart lead you? 


Here's a clever saying:  the fine art of writing is the professional skill of applying one's ass to the chair!     Which is to say: having all those great stories in your head isn't enough...one must discipline one's self to sit down and write the stories that wind around our brains!


What are you writing about now?   I'm interested.


~debo

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Hi, debo,


As long as a person has a passion to do something right, that's the greatest thing. If he or she doesn't have a passion to write things, it's a kind of drudgery even if he/she is professional.


I like your point that young writers' words are "cleaner".  I also think young writers' words are more natural and attuned to kids.

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I think you are correct, young writers may be more attune to young readers... I also think that young writers should be encouraged, and that publishers should be willing to publish their work ~ if it is good....you see there is a tickly little problem with this, so far as I am aware there are no "young publishers"....which means the work will have to be interesting to the adult reader who considers whether or not to publish it. 


You sound as if you are walking that fine line between young and not-so-young....are you a teen?  


When I was a teacher I had all my students write for publication.  I helped them to learn the format and I helped to edit  their work, then I helped them submit it to magazines that were strictly for children writers.  They loved the challenge.


Have you written anything yet....? Because it is likely that eventually you will ~ your enthusiasm is so high ~ I think you should give it a try!

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I'm going to be a teacher soon (bilingual education).  Yes, I can write lots of things but I don't think I have a talent for writing novels.  Yet, to encourage kids to read and write is what I can do.

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If you are going to be a bilingual teacher why don't you have a profile here, and join insome of the other conversations?  I never see you around.  


Bilingual books, especially story books, are in high demand.   Is it English/Spanish ?  


When you work with the kids you could offer to help them get published .... and that would be excellent.... still, you should try your hand at it...it really is fun to write a piece you're proud of... I'm working on a piece now that could use some hispanic influence... it's called The La Luz Trinity...about 3 sisters who want to travel to Juarez to work in the factories....can you see where this is going?

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Bilingual education may include any bilingual situations (English + one of minority languages). It studies how bilingual children can succeed academically in the English setting. Nancy Yi Fan is one example of bilingual children who have achieved success in English writing and all other subjects.


There are more and more students with bilingual backgrounds in the USA. I think inspiring confidence in these children is very constructive.  What's your attitude toward bilingual students?

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My attitude toward all children, bilingual or not, is one of love and affection.  I also have a deep respect for children, and they seem to sense this in me because we are drawn to one another.  Yes, bi-lingual can mean any two languages, that's why I asked if your other language is Spanish. 


I also speak Sign Language....does this make me bi-lingual? or bi-fingural?


Multi-language students abound in other parts of the world.  When we are very young, our brains are soaking in everything around us, so if young children are given the opportunity to experience other languages they can learn them very quickly, with little struggle.  I have a girlfriend from Poland who speaks four languages.  I admire this quality.


When I travelled to Tahiti I was told that students must have a minimum of three languages just to get into their high schools.  (amazing and wonderful)


I am currently writing courses and lesson plans to teach English to international students on a website called Myngle.  Have you heard of this school yet?  If you are interested, go to Myngle.com and check them out.


If I were to have another career field it would have been as an anthropologist to study the cultures and mythologies of the world.  This subject fascinates me.  


In my last post I asked a question... >>>I'm working on a piece now that could use some hispanic influence... it's called The La Luz Trinity...about 3 sisters who want to travel to Juarez to work in the factories....can you see where this is going?<<<   ...will you respond?   Is your second language Spanish, do you know about the situation in Juarez?   Just curious.


Wish you the best, hope you keep coming back,


~debo


 

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I can "speak" sign language, english, and french, and bits of spanish


(mainly the bad words ), but me an angel I promise.

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I speak Hmong.  I'm going to learn some Chinese, Japanese, and Korean and work with  Asian American students.

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That sounds cool, I would go for it.

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First is Best? How do readers feel about an author's second book, compared to the first?


 A debut by an author, especially one that generates quite a buzz, pumps up a lot of anticipation among its fans. When The Sequel or Book 2 comes out, though, it's not uncommon to hear "Pretty great! But somehow Book 1 is better…" (remember the reception to Paolini's Eldest)

 

Why? Is this really a trend of skill decline? A drying up of inspiration? Or is #2 merely eclipsed by the publicity and fame of its predecessor? (Thus the infamous "curse".) Still, there are some cases where authors have pulled off a book that is an equal, if not a superior.

 

What more interesting to apply this to the unique case of a teen author, Nancy Yi Fan, whose fantasy fiction Swordbird (HarperCollins, no less) was published in 2007 when she was 13. The kid was 10 when she started writing it. About "{the impact of war on trust and friendship among bird characters in a forest", the book's been widely touted and widely liked by tweens. I took it up out of curiosity—and frankly, it's a commendable offering: somewhat simplistic characterization, but forgivable for a kid, and besides the plot was compelling enough; a child's voice, but a promising one. You should definitely consider letting your child read it if you want to see him/her motivated to read and write more. Anyhow, at the time it was said that Fan was writing Book 2.

 

And that book is now in bookstores. Called Sword Quest, a prequel. I've read it. The book follows good ol' epic journey, with a Hitler-like arch-villain who grows bitter because he has only one wing. But I believe the book was restricted from its potential because it was a prequel. Isn't there a mindset that you don't have to rush through a prequel, since you know pretty much the results?

 

So what do you think about the "Book 2 Curse"? Do you think Nancy Yi Fan's second book broke it? Any examples of other authors, or tips to avoid such a scenario…

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I disagree. I love Swordbird J, but Sword Quest is distinctly better. There’s no “slump”. It’s stronger.


Nancy Yi Fan improved on her second book. You know why? She is in high school now, and her writing is much more mature than when she was 10. This accounts for the significant leap of sophistication that’s special to her case. I didn’t think being a prequel detracted from it. It tells the story of how the god-like “Swordbird” was once a simple mortal dishwasher who set out to do good. And the sardonically malicious villain Maldeor, I thought he is more realistic, three-dimensional, and more interesting than the “plain evil” hawk Turnatt in the first book. I was really fascinated by the characters themselves not the outcome, which is what a good prequel should do.

Most people though, only know Swordbird because it was first and it was featured on the Martha Stewart Show. They’re missing out!

Of course, another example of an author who kept writing as good or better: J K Rowling, great books, even down to the last one! I think a remedy to your “curse” is to not repeat plot devices, add new characters to the cast. Or to make the book longer and “heftier”.

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go here, see this >>>   http://theapple.monster.com/news/articles/7309-teacher-creates-student-publishing-company    right up your alley!


Keep Smiling,


~debo

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The bird is back!  Go here: http://www.chinadaily.com.cn/china/2009-05/09/content_7759990.htm

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 Dear bobblehead,


Aw, s/he cute. But he definitely needs a sword. 

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Ok : http://www.northumberlandgazette.co.uk/news/Unique-castle-sword-found-in.1580775.jp


Now we have the answer to: Which came first...The boid or the swoid?

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Interesting sources!

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Sword Quest


I really like this book because it was much more exciting then Swordbird. One part is very sad because one of the main characters dies. I would recommend this book to people you like adventure with little violence.


— Percy Potter, 9 year old bookworm from Amazon

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 Dear Percy,


Any relation to Harry?   Welcome to TheApple, and thanks for posting. I especially like the fact that you gave nothing away by not revealing just who the main character that dies is.


Hope you'll continue to visit and that you'll always remain a (fellow) bookworm.


Regards,


John

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Sword Quest


I really like this book because it was much more exciting then Swordbird. One part is very sad because one of the main characters dies. I would recommend this book to people you like adventure with little violence.


— Percy Potter, 9 year old bookworm from Amazon


 


Now, " I would recommend this book to people you like adventure..." is much more feasible. 


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Ok : http://www.northumberlandgazette.co.uk/news/Unique-castle-sword-found-in.1580775.jp


Now we have the answer to: Which came first...The boid or the swoid?


I heard it was some form of toid.


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I love the swordbird series. Bird superheros are awesome.


– Mojo

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The hero of Swordbird is an escaped ’slavebird’, Miltin, who leads the woodbirds once they learn of Turnatt’s strategy. The title refers to a legendarily heroic bird of peace. The Swordbird is the only one who can save the forest, so young birds Aska and Miltin fly off on a dangerous mission to find the Leasone gem. This stone, paired with an ancient song from the ‘Old Scripture’, will conjure Swordbird’s help.


 —The Guardian

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Sword Quest


Wind-voice, a half-dove, is a slave of the giant archeopteryx empire. His mother was a dove, and he never knew his father. The king of the archeopteryx is permanently power-hungry and Wind-voice is the only one standing firmly in front of his goal: a beautiful sword said to bring peace to the fighting world. Can Wind-voice and his powerful friends get to the sword before the archeopteryx king and deliver peace to all birdkind? Read this wonderful and exciting book to find out! I liked it very much because the plot was extremily exciting, and the bad guys made me tremble! Wind-voice’s quest for peace was breathtaking, and most parts made me gasp with astonishment. It’s amazing that a fourteen-year-old wrote this! I loved this book; and the book before it, and can’t wait for the third one!


—Grimstnzborith Janeen-san-elda svit-kona

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 Let's be honest. Children are not the voice we hear on this blog.

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Swordbird


I thought this book was very exciting.Some parts were a little crooked but it was totally worth it!


Libby age 9

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Swordbird


This book had an interesting plot. I think my friend baily would like this book. She would like it because it had lots of details, exciting, and action.


—Kayla Ky. (age 11, grade 6)


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